What I Offer
Suggestions for Line Edits: The difference between good and great can be a teeny-tiny adjustment. I'll flag clarity issues, inconsistent tone, formatting missteps, and wordiness.
Structural Notes: It’s impossible to get a birds' eye view when you’re in the weeds. I’ll give you feedback focused on pacing, story structure, act breaks, and emotional arcs.
Formatting: It’s hard to get someone to hear you when you’re not speaking the same language. Presenting your work in the appropriate form is a tedious yet absolutely vital task that I happen to LOVE doing
Research: In another life, I would have been a private investigator. I worked in journalism for years, and this is my favorite aspect of the process. I will dig deep on any topic of your choosing — it’s my pleasure, really.
Brainstorming: In no uncertain terms, I’m your go-to “wall” to “bounce shit against" until we get you through to the other side.
How It Works
We Talk: A quick conversation (or email exchange) helps me understand your goals and timeline.
I Read & Mark-Up: I'll go through your material with fresh eyes, taking notes on what's working, what needs attention, and where the biggest opportunities are.
We Workshop: You'll get written notes plus a follow-up call to talk through solutions, answer questions, and make sure you've got a clear path forward.
Turnaround Times
Just Formatting: 24-48 hours
Script notes (feature or pilot): 3-5 days
Deck/pitch/research materials: 1-2 weeks
I can often accommodate tighter deadlines.